Resources

Audio/Video: @http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PMydV2w0uU4

Text: @http://www.heraldscotland.com/why-police-should-have-the-right-to-strike-1.831312

Slides

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__Corrections of Slides__
Slide 7: __The__ right to strike

**Oral feedback**
//Communication// Good introduction and transitions between speakers, but quite a lot of learning by heart which make your presentation a little stilted.

//Slides// You gave a lot of information that was not on the slides, perhaps too much. The listener can easily get lost. Very sober colours and design.

//Content// You presented quite a balanced view of strikes, perhaps making it hard for the audience to find questions.

Slide 2 (Julien) Good communication, good introduction of presentation and presenters.

mines (should sound like lines) achievement make us tend on this right analyse > ANalyse delicate (DElikit)

Slide 3 (Steeve) Jerky delivery - try to speak more smoothly. It is not always easy to understand you.

law (o like Paul, call, not like low, pole) arrested based unfair layoff

Slide 4 (Acyl) Intonation and delivery are good, but you are a little too quiet and self-effacing. More volume and more energy required to convince the audience.

in a third hand > a third point to bear in mind is right of striking > the right to strike deVELop is being under critics > is under fire/under threat/in danger

Slide 5 (Beya) Good volume and communication in general, though some trouble

poLICE conTROL so then we are going to talk about hospitals > so NOW we are going to talk grippe A > swine flu if the sector are strike > if this sector goes on strike sclerolised > frozen, paralysed by mailS > by mail_ it will froze > it will freeze blockageS signalising > signalling

Slide 6 (Sihem) A little hesitant, although communication is not bad. Sometimes it is hard to understand you because your speech comes in bursts - take your time and try to speak more smoothly.

submitted to some rules > subject to some rules conFUSion doesn't permit to people to use > doesn't permit people to use CATerpillar sequestration > kidnapping allow (should sound like cow, how, now) it's a topic which need more discussion

Slide 7 (Julien) Good fluency, but sometimes it sounds like you have learned your whole text by heart, instead of speaking spontaneously.

public function > civil service, public sector